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Created: 2011-09-24 02:17:17
delasangalo
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So i decided that i am going to try and get some referrals by making websites.It actually didn't turn out too bad as i already have 7 referrals,but the thing is they are not active or not completely signed up.Here is my 2 sites i have made so far.

http://howtogetfreemicrosoftpoints.webs.com/

http://freeminecraftgiftcode.webs.com/

I would like to know what i could do to change these and make them better or what ways to get referrals.
xiao2717
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Most ref. are like that, they just sign up and do nothing :(
2011-01-30 02:03:55
pasibe1
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I really love both sites. The background and color you used for them was amazing.

But what I suggest that you do simply to use less words and a bit more pictures.
If you were a ref, would you rather read:

walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftextwalloftext
walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftextwalloftext
walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftextwalloftext
walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftextwalloftext
walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftext walloftextwalloftext

or

interesting facts interesting facts interesting facts interesting facts

interesting facts interesting facts interesting facts interesting facts
interesting facts interesting facts

interesting facts interesting facts interesting facts interesting facts
interesting facts interesting facts
interesting facts

checkout my first ref site for example: http://freemaplestorymeso.weebly.com/
When I first started, it was just a big wall of text with some pictures at the end.
Amazingly I still got 1 ref while is was that way. But then I changed it to how it is now and I quickly began to get more refs.

So see If you can break up your text, use less of it, and add more pictures.

And if your looking for more active refs, then there is little you can do to change that. Some will stay (like me :D) and some will quit. What you could do though is to encourage them to stay.
Say things like: Most people usually quit around this time. BUT DONT QUIT. It may seem hard at first but when you get your first prize, it will all be worth it.

I also recently wrote a heart filled and passionate message to my first ref compelling his to stay.

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